Question

 

進(jìn)入高中已經(jīng)一個(gè)月了，你對(duì)你身邊的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境由陌生到熟悉，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下文提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀闳绾伟才拍憬酉聛?lái)的高中生活，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括： 1. 確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo) 2. 改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法 3. 學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立的生活 4. 參加各種課外活動(dòng) 5. 處理好與同學(xué)的關(guān)系 注意： 1. 短文的內(nèi)容要連貫，完整 2. 短文單詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出的單詞不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)） In the past month, my life has changed a lot since I started my senior high school.

 

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【答案】

In the past month, my life has changed a lot since I started my senior high school. In the following days, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself. In my spare time, I will take part in different kinds of school activities, for example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teachers at school. I think I will have a wonderful senior high school life.

【解析】

本文屬于給出漢語(yǔ)提示的半開放性的寫作。

1）審題：結(jié)合本篇作文的提示與寫作要求，確定以下審題確定以下內(nèi)容： ?  

①文體：描寫性 ②時(shí)態(tài)：主要用一般將來(lái)時(shí) ③人稱：第一人稱(I) ④要點(diǎn)：見題目要求

2）擬草稿：根據(jù)審題情況，主要步驟如下：①怎么開頭？（要突出主題，啟引下文，常寫1—2句）：

In the past month, my life has changed a lot since I started my senior high school. In the following days, I plan to?   ②怎么羅列要點(diǎn)？注意適當(dāng)合并要點(diǎn)。

③怎么結(jié)尾？（根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容的需要，一般1—2句）： ?   

I think I will have a wonderful senior high school life.

④怎么連句成文？注意行文邏輯上下連貫。注意恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用連接詞，并適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句式。