Question

第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）
第一節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：
1．每處錯誤及其修改僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Jack Green was the football coach at an American college. He was appointed to find good players, and they weren’t smart enough to be accepted.
One day, the coach has brought an excellent player to the director of the college and suggested the student allowed to enter without an examination. “Well,” the director said after thinking for a while, “I’d better ask you a few questions first.” Then the student was called for and asked some easier questions, but he didn’t know any of the answers. At last the director said, “Well, what is thirty – four minus two?” It was quite a long time when the student answered, “Thirty – three.” The director threw up his hands and looked at the coach disappointed, but the coach said, “Oh, please let him in, sir! He was only wrong by two comparing with all the others.”

Answer 1

Jack Green was the football coach at an American college. He was appointed to find good
a
players, and they weren’t smart enough to be accepted.
but
One day, the coach has brought an excellent player to the director of the college and suggested
the student ^ allowed to enter without an examination. “Well,” the director said after thinking for a
加be/being
while, “I’d better ask you a few questions first.” Then the student was called for and asked some
in
easier questions, but he didn’t know any of the answers. At last the director said, “Well, what is
easy
thirty – four minus two?” It was quite a long time when the student answered, “Thirty – three.” The
before
director threw up his hands and looked at the coach disappointed, but the coach said, “Oh, please
disappointedly
let him in, sir! He was only wrong by two comparing with all the others.”
compared

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