Question

假如你是李華，學校組織了一項“有煩惱向誰說”的調查活動。請用英語給校報編輯寫一封信，反映相關的情況。

[寫作內容]

請根據以下信息，介紹調查結果（如圖所示）以及持相應想法的理由。

[寫作要求]

只能用5個句子表達全部內容（不含已給句子）。

[評分標準]

句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

One possible version:

Dear Editor,

Recently we have carried out a survey—To whom do you go when in trouble? 61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble. The reason for it is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to for the reason that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences. However, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others’ business and some of them find it hard to get along with others.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，這道題目有個特點就是要結合已給出的圖表，所以首先必須看懂圖表，并且要用第一人稱來寫。寫信時不能只是生硬的寫出調查結果，一定要闡明持相應想法的理由。需要注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意題目要求只能用5個句子表達全部內容（不含已給句子）。

考點：書信類作文

點評：本文屬于書信類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。