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8．隨著我國經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展與對外開放程度的提高，越來越多的學子走出國門留學深造．根據(jù)下面的提示，請你以"Studying Abroad"為題，寫一篇100左右的演講稿．
內(nèi)容提示：
1．出國留學的優(yōu)點：開闊視野；體驗當?shù)氐娘L情；交更多的朋友；更快更好地掌握一門外語．
2．出國留學的缺點：語言障礙不利于學習；費用高昂；而花大量時間打工又會影響學習．
參考詞匯：語言障礙language barrier；足夠的adequate
Studying Abroad
The topic of my speech today is"Studying Abroad"．
Attending schools abroad has many advantages．Firstly，by looking at our own country from outside，we can widen our vision and broaden our minds．（高分句型一）Secondly，we can visit famous scenic spots and make friends with the local people．Thirdly，we can use the foreign language in our daily life so that our ability in the second language may be improved quickly．（高分句型二）
However，there are also some disadvantages in attending a foreign school．The most serious problem is the language barrier．Most students do not have adequate knowledge of the language spoken there．On arriving there，they find it difficult to understand what the teachers are saying．Furthermore，the cost of living is much higher than that in our country，so most students have to find part time jobs to support themselves．Faced with these difficulties，many students find themselves unable to pay full attention to their studies and learn little．（高分句型三）
On the whole，it is a good thing to study abroad．However，one must not lose sight of the disadvantages．
Thank you for your listening．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息隨著我國經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展與對外開放程度的提高，越來越多的學子走出國門留學深造．根據(jù)下面的提示，請你以"Studying Abroad"為題，寫一篇100左右的演講稿，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：出國留學的優(yōu)點：開闊視野；體驗當?shù)氐娘L情；交更多的朋友；更快更好地掌握一門外語．出國留學的缺點：語言障礙不利于學習；費用高昂；而花大量時間打工又會影響學習．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；However然而；Furthermore而且；pay full attention to注意；On the whole總的來說；
Firstly，by looking at our own country from outside，we can widen our vision and broaden our minds．（高分句型一）
Thirdly，we can use the foreign language in our daily life so that our ability in the second language may be improved quickly．（高分句型二）
Faced with these difficulties，many students find themselves unable to pay full attention to their studies and learn little．（高分句型三）

解答 Studying Abroad
       The topic of my speech today is"Studying Abroad"．
       Attending schools abroad has many advantages．Firstly，by looking at our own country from outside，we can widen our vision and broaden our minds．（高分句型一）Secondly，we can visit famous scenic spots and make friends with the local people．Thirdly，we can use the foreign language in our daily life so that our ability in the second language may be improved quickly．（高分句型二）
       However，there are also some disadvantages in attending a foreign school．The most serious problem is the language barrier．Most students do not have adequate knowledge of the language spoken there．On arriving there，they find it difficult to understand what the teachers are saying．Furthermore，the cost of living is much higher than that in our country，so most students have to find part time jobs to support themselves．Faced with these difficulties，many students find themselves unable to pay full attention to their studies and learn little．（高分句型三）
      On the whole，it is a good thing to study abroad．However，one must not lose sight of the disadvantages．
      Thank you for your listening．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．