Question

（2009.福建卷）書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）

某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社擬成立“微笑俱樂(lè)部”，現(xiàn)向癸未征募會(huì)員。要求申請(qǐng)者提交一篇題為“I want to Smile”的英語(yǔ)短文。請(qǐng)你以申請(qǐng)者的身份，根據(jù)以下思路圖的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

注意：

1.       根據(jù)思路圖適當(dāng)展開(kāi)，以使行文連貫；

2.       詞數(shù)：120左右

I Want to Smile

                                                                                

                                                                             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version

There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible,

First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.  

In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.  

【解析】本文為圖畫(huà)式作文，做題的關(guān)鍵是---審題，考生要把握如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.     文體：說(shuō)明文。

2.     主體時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

3.     主體人稱(chēng)：第一人稱(chēng)。

4.     內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：①微笑的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；②想對(duì)其微笑的人物（父母）；③對(duì)父母微笑的理由；④對(duì)自己微笑的理由；⑤總結(jié)。