Question

短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
Best wishes.
　　                                                        Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

【小題1】a-an
【小題2】去掉in
【小題3】held-holds
【小題4】made-making
【小題5】that-which
【小題6】attentions-attention
【小題7】he-you
【小題8】is后面加to
【小題9】and-but
【小題10】gratefully-grateful

解析【小題1】exchange是元音開頭的單詞，用an;
【小題2】next term在句中單獨做時間狀語；
【小題3】整個文章都是現(xiàn)在時；
【小題4】doing做結(jié)果狀語表示正常的結(jié)果；
【小題5】that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，要用which;
【小題6】attention是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題7】前面提及的主語是you;
【小題8】不定式做表語表示具體的行為；
【小題9】上下文構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系；
【小題10】be后面接形容詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。