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8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
The way of communication in people's life has changed a lot of in recent years．In the past，people keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or use the public telephone．But now almost everyone have a mobile phone．People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time．What's more，people have easy access the Internet，it enables them to send and accept e-mails whenever they like．With these changes，people's pace of life has been quickened and people's work has been made more efficiently．It used to take them several days to hear from each other，and now it takes only several minutes，even if we are in two different continents．

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分析 文章大意：本文主要講述了在近幾年人們交流方式的改變． 過去，人們主要通過寫信或用公用電話，而現在幾乎每個人都有手機，而且人們可以上網，這使得我們的交流變得更有效．

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1．去掉of． 考查短語搭配．  a lot of許多，其中of是介詞，后面需要跟名詞作賓語，這里沒有of的賓語，因此要去掉of，故此處把of去掉．
2．keep--kept．考查時態．句子的時間狀語是in the past，是過去時間，句子應該用一般過去時，故此處把keep改為kept．
3．use--using． 考查動名詞．by是介詞后面跟動詞的ing形式，or連接writing letters和use the public telephone，因此use的形式應該和writing形式一致，故此處把use改為using．
4．have--has．考查主謂一致．句子的主語是everyone，是第三人稱單數，故句子謂語應該用has，故把have改為has．
5．access 后面加to．考查介詞搭配． have access to sth．是接近某物，此處缺少介詞to，故此處加上to．
6．it--which． 考查定語從句．逗號之后是一個非限制性定語從句，it不能做關系代詞，關系代詞應該用which，故此處把it改為which．
7．accept--receive．考查動詞． 接收郵件應該用receive，accept表示主動接受．
8．efficiently--efficient． 考查形容詞． 這是一個被動句，變為主動形式應該是make people's work efficient，此處由形容詞作賓語補足語．
9．and--but．考查連詞，根據句意判斷前后兩句是轉折關系，故此處把and改為but．
10．we--they．考查人稱代詞． 根據前半句的them判斷此處的人稱與句意不符，故此處應該把we改為they．

點評 改錯題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉化．
做好短文改錯題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對短文有個了解． 2．充分運用語言的基礎知識，從句型結構、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習慣用法出發，進行分析判斷，盡快找出錯誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語境，從上下文關系中找出表達連接關系或邏輯關系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進關系還是轉折關系，是因果關系還是讓步關系．