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18．作為高中學(xué)生，你肯定經(jīng)歷過多次考試，體驗過成功，也遭遇過失敗．請你根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容，簡要概述高中學(xué)生中普遍存在的對考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度，并結(jié)合自身實際，說明你的觀點．

態(tài)度一	態(tài)度二	你的觀點
當(dāng)考試結(jié)果不如人意時，情緒低落，喪失信心，不再繼續(xù)努力．	當(dāng)考試失敗時，分析并找出失敗的原因，鼓勵自己，增強(qiáng)自信，避免再犯同樣的錯誤．	失敗乃成功之母…

要求：1、詞數(shù)：150左右；
  2、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文討論高中學(xué)生中普遍存在的對考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度這個話題．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明主題；二兩種不同的態(tài)度；三自己的觀點．
高分句型：
1．Some of us become low in spirits in face of failure，and even some  are so disappointed that they don't want to make further efforts in their studies．句子里become low in spirits 表示"情緒低落"； in face of 表示"面對"；so…that 表示"如此…以至于"；make further efforts 表示"做進(jìn)一步的努力"．
當(dāng)考試結(jié)果不如人意時，我們中的一些人情緒低落，甚至喪失信心，不再繼續(xù)努力．
2．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won't repeat their mistakes in their later examinations．句子里spare no efforts in 表示"盡全力做某事"； so that 表示"為了"．
他們盡力分析他們失敗的原因，同時為了下次不再犯同樣的錯誤，他們鼓勵自己更有信心．

解答 As middle school students，we have all taken examinations of different types and experienced success as well as failure．Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．（點明主題）
Some of us become low in spirits in face of failure，and even some  are so disappointed that they don't want to make further efforts in their studies．【高分句型一】As a result，their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．Fortunately，some students take quite positive attitudes towards their setbacks．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won't repeat their mistakes in their later examinations．【高分句型二】（兩種不同的態(tài)度）
As far as I'm concerned，I believe that failure is the mother of success．So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning，we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality．（自己的觀點）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作時，在體裁明確、中心突出、要點清晰的前提下，應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點逐條表達(dá)出來．表達(dá)時應(yīng)該綜合運用所掌握的知識，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語的干擾，按照英語的習(xí)慣方式，用地道的英語表達(dá)出來，力求做到語言準(zhǔn)確無誤．