Question

15．下面這幅圖片展現了女兒為媽媽洗腳的情景．請根據你對這幅圖片的理解用英語寫一篇短文．
你的短文應包含以下內容：
1．描述圖片內容；如情景、人物、動作等等；
2．結合自身實際；談談你的感想；
3．舉例說明你該怎樣孝敬父母．
注意：1．不要做簡單描述，可參照下面文章開頭所給提示，發揮想象；
2．詞數100左右，開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數．
Respecting the elderly is the virtue of our country．The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）
Now I can help with the everyday washing，bedroom cleaning，or at least prepare breakfast myself，so as to share my mother's daily burden．Meanwhile，I think the best way to show respect and kindness to parents is to finish the task of study well and remember to care about our parents as well．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息下面這幅圖片展現了女兒為媽媽洗腳的情景．請根據你對這幅圖片的理解用英語寫一篇短文，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：描述圖片內容；如情景、人物、動作等等；結合自身實際；談談你的感想；舉例說明你該怎樣孝敬父母．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：remind sb of sth使某人想起某事；On the contrary相反的是；pay attention to關注；in return作為回報；at least至少；Meanwhile同時；care about關心；
The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
  All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）
But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）

解答 Respecting the elderly is the virtue of our country．The picture shows us a moving moment when a mother is washing her mother's feet，with her daughter helping out with a fan in her hand．（高分句型一）
      All this reminds me of my mother，a general worker，who has a heavy burden of household and work．（高分句型二）But she still has much concern for me．On the contrary，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，always thinking what I could do in return is studying．（高分句型三）
      Now I can help with the everyday washing，bedroom cleaning，or at least prepare breakfast myself，so as to share my mother's daily burden．Meanwhile，I think the best way to show respect and kindness to parents is to finish the task of study well and remember to care about our parents as well．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．