Question

18．假如你是負責美國學生來華夏令營的一名中方工作人員，收到了美國營員Peter的電子郵件，他在動身來中國之前，想了解一下中方給他安排的寄宿家庭（host family）的有關情況，請你根據下列信息回復郵件：
1．住房寬敞，有私家車；2．懂英語，樂于交流；3．去年接待過美國學生．
注意：（1）詞數不少于100；
（2）可適當增加細節使行文連貫；
（3）信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to receive your e-mail asking about the family we have arranged for you to stay with．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是負責美國學生來華夏令營的一名中方工作人員，收到了美國營員Peter的電子郵件，他在動身來中國之前，想了解一下中方給他安排的寄宿家庭（host family）的有關情況，請你根據下列信息回復郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、住房寬敞，有私家車；2．懂英語，樂于交流；3．去年接待過美國學生． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：located in 位于；apart from 除…之外；places of interest名勝古跡； have no difficulty in在…方面沒有困難；Located in a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood，a large fully-equipped apartment answers all your need．（高分句型一）
Because all the members of the family can speak fluent English and are outgoing，I'm sure you will have no difficulty in communicating with them．（高分句型二）Above all，they hosted two American students last year，through which they have gained lots of experience．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm very glad to receive your e-mail asking about the family we have arranged for you to stay with．
      Located in a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood，a large fully-equipped apartment answers all your need．（高分句型一）Apart from the convenient public transportation，the family's own car can also take you to some nearby places of interest．Because all the members of the family can speak fluent English and are outgoing，I'm sure you will have no difficulty in communicating with them．（高分句型二）Above all，they hosted two American students last year，through which they have gained lots of experience．（高分句型三）In addition，the hostess's expert cooking can guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
      Now they are fully prepared to host you and make friends with you．And I do hope you will have a pleasant time in China．See you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．