Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\） 劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Once upon a time there was a rich man. He had a lot of money, but he felt unhappy all the times. Finally, the rich man left for home to look for  happiness. He visited many places and met many rich men. All of them said they were not happy, too. On his way home, the rich man saw a farmer work in the field. He went up to the farmer and asked, “Could you tell me if you felt happy?” “Yes, I’m quite happier. I always feel satisfying about everything in my life,” the farmer answered. “Please tell me how you find happiness,” asked the rich man. The farmer answered with smile on his face. “It’s very easy of me to answer the question. If you work hardly, have three meals a day and go to bed early without worries, you’ll be the happiest man in the world.”

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Once upon a time there was a rich man. He had a lot of money, but he felt unhappy all the times. Finally, the  rich man left for home to look  for happiness. He

time （這里指時間，是不可數名詞）  （離開家用leave即可）

visited many places and met many rich men. All of them said they were not happy, too. On his way home, the rich man saw a farmer work in the field . He went up to

either （否定句里的也用either表示） working（farmer與work構成主動關系）

the farmer and asked, “ Could you tell me if you felt happy?” “Yes I’m quite

feel（直接引語用現在時）

happier. I always feel satisfying about everything in my life,” the farmer

happy（quite后接原級）   satisfied（修飾人用satisfied）

answered. “Please tell me how you find happiness,” asked the rich man. The farmer answered with ∧ smile on his face. “ It’s very easy of me to answer the

a (泛指微笑)           for（easy不是表示人性格的名詞，后面用of）

question. If you work hardly, have three meals a day and go to bed early without

hard(hardly幾乎不，在這里意思錯誤)

worries, you’ll be the happiest man in the world.”

【解析】如上