Question

14．李明剛轉學到你們學校，發現上課聽不太懂老師的英語授課，課下與外教溝通也有困難．于是他向你求助．請你給李明回封電子郵件，內容包括：
1．給出建議，如看電影，聽英文新聞；
2．給出建議的理由
注意：詞數100左右；
Dear Li Ming，
I'm happy to receive your email．From your e-mail，I have learned that you are having trouble with listening and speaking．
To improve your listening and speaking skill，you can try the following ways．（高分句型一）Firstly，you can watch some English movies，because they are good for you to improve your listening．What's more，you can also learn some new words and expressions．Secondly，try listening to English news，such as VOA Special English or BBC Special English，which is really good to your listening and reading ability．（高分句型二）At last，you had better talk with others in English．Don't be shy．
These are all my suggestions．I hope they can help you．I believe that you will get used to the studying there quickly．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息李明剛轉學到你們學校，發現上課聽不太懂老師的英語授課，課下與外教溝通也有困難．于是他向你求助．請你給李明回封電子郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：給出建議，如看電影，聽英文新聞；給出建議的理由2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：have trouble with在…方面有麻煩；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；What's more而且；At last最后；get used to 習慣于
To improve your listening and speaking skill，you can try the following ways．（高分句型一）
Secondly，try listening to English news，such as VOA Special English or BBC Special English，which is really good to your listening and reading ability．（高分句型二）
I believe that you will get used to the studying there quickly．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Ling Ming，
       I am happy to receive your e-mail．From your e-mail，I have learned that you are having trouble with listening and speaking．
      To improve your listening and speaking skill，you can try the following ways．（高分句型一）Firstly，you can watch some English movies，because they are good for you to improve your listening．What's more，you can also learn some new words and expressions．Secondly，try listening to English news，such as VOA Special English or BBC Special English，which is really good to your listening and reading ability．（高分句型二）At last，you had better talk with others in English．Don't be shy．
      These are all my suggestions．I hope they can help you．I believe that you will get used to the studying there quickly．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．