Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一個橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

This is a story told by my father : When I was boy , the most exciting thing was when to

celebrate the Spring Festival . My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes . Once , I just couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner . As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck , I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking me . Shake her head , she said , “It isn’t a good time to do that , dear .” I apologize and controlled me at the best till the dinner started . You know , that was a dinner we had waited for several month .    

Answer 1

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I just couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner . As I was about ∧take a

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piece from a cooked duck , I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking ∧ me .

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Shake her head , she said , “It isn’t a good time to do that , dear .”I apologize

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and controlled me at the best till the dinner started . You know , that was

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a dinner we had waited for several month .        

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