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5．假定你是李華，你校學生會近日將舉辦中國傳統文化展會（The Traditional Chinese Culture Fair）．請給你的外教Mr．Smith寫一封電子郵件，邀請他參加．郵件的內容包括：
1．展會的時間和地點：本周五下午2：00--5：00，本校藝術中心；
2．展會宗旨：讓更多的人了解中國優秀的傳統文化；
3．展示內容：書籍、圖片、實物等．
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假定你是李華，你校學生會近日將舉辦中國傳統文化展會（The Traditional Chinese Culture Fair）．請給你的外教Mr．Smith寫一封電子郵件，邀請他參加，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：展會的時間和地點：本周五下午2：00--5：00，本校藝術中心；展會宗旨：讓更多的人了解中國優秀的傳統文化；展示內容：書籍、圖片、實物等． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：：aim to do目的是；as well as也，和；not only，but also不僅，而且；look forward to盼望Since this event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture，the staff，all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome．（高分句型一）At the fair，related books，pictures，videos and objects will be exhibited，through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture much better but definitely feel the unique beauty of it．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
       I'm writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair to be held by our school at the Art Center this Friday afternoon，from 2pm to 5pm．
       Since this event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture，the staff，all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome．（高分句型一）At the fair，related books，pictures，videos and objects will be exhibited，through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture much better but definitely feel the unique beauty of it．（高分句型二）
       If you're interested，please come and enjoy it．And I'd be glad to offer any help．
       Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．