Question

假如你叫李平，你的美國筆友Tom來信詢問你十一假期過的怎樣。請根據表格中的信息給他回信，說明你在十一假期中的活動和理由。

活動	理由
休息	學習緊張，缺少鍛煉和休息
看望鄉下的祖父母	幫助他們做點家務，并給他們談了身邊的新鮮事
和朋友進行短途旅游	欣賞大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣

注意：詞數100左右。

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. And it’s a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday.
First, I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. Of course, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends. What’s more, I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air. What did you do in your summer holidays? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping

本文是考生非常熟悉的書信形式，但是要點要靠考生自己梳理出來，有一定的難度，因為原文只給出了一個表格，需要考生自己整理出6個要點，并用適當的語言表達出來，對于考生的整理能力要求較高。寫作時注意使用合理的連接詞，First, What’s more等詞的使用使文章更連貫，使用高級詞匯和1,2兩個高級句型，讓文章更有檔次。象這句話I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise.使用了because引導的原因狀語從句，還有as a result of和as well as這樣的詞組。做到學以致用。