Question

第一節(jié)  短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Tom,

It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like tell you something which took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we hold a grown－up ceremony for our coming 18 years old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown－up we should have a sense of duty for our social from now on. Then we showed our thanks for to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think its very important for us. I will never remember the day in 

my life.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

    It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like∧ tell you something which took place in my school yesterday.

                                             to                 that      

   In the afternoon we hold a grown－up ceremony for our coming 18 years old birthday. At

                     held

first we made an oath that as grown－up we should have a sense of duty for our social from

                                  ups                                   society 

now on. Then we showed our thanks for to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring

                              

us up and teachers who have been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave us cards

                                           patiently

expressed their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing or

expressing                                                                 and

dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never

remember the day in my life.

forget

                                                                       

Yours,

Li Hua