Question

 假如你是李華，最近你在瀏覽一個新西蘭中學網站時，看到一位名叫Tom的中學生的留言，他計劃在暑假期間到中國的北京旅游，希望能有一名中國留學生做他的導游。你對此很感興趣，請根據以下要點提示寫一封e-mail給他，介紹你的相關情況。

  主要內容包括 ：

1．希望做他的導游；               2．打算如何給他做導游；               3．期盼他的回復。

  注意：

1. 詞數100左右；           2. 可適當增加情節，以使行文連貫；3. 信的開頭已為你寫好。

Dear Tom,

  Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.

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Yours sincerely,

                                                                       Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Tom,

Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it. I get to know your wishes that you intend to travel in Beijing during the summer vacation with a Chinese student as your guide.

Learning this news, I am really willing to travel with you and introduce Beijing to you. I know as a brilliant guide I am supposed to make your journey interesting and meaningful. For one thing, I will keep you company visiting numerous great places of interest and enjoy the wonderful sightseeing. For another, I am going to tell you the long and rich history of Beijing.

I am looking forward to the reply from you. With all my wishes you could give me this honor.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文根據要求和內容來看，包括：1.希望做他的導游；2.打算如何給他做導游；3.期盼他的回復。要用不同的時態表述。應用第一人稱的語氣表達。還應該注意使用較高級的詞匯和句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。字數要求100詞左右。

【亮點說明】文章結構清楚，層次明確。使用了For one thing，For another,來說明自己做導游的優勢。另外用了am supposed to，keep doing，還運用了-ing形式作狀語，looking forward to；定語從句、同位語從句等短語和較為復雜的表達。

考點：提綱作文。