Question

6．假如你是李華，請給你的美國朋友Tom寫一封信，告訴他你打算參加暑期夏令營，希望他一起參加，郵件的內容包括：
1．介紹訓練營的相關內容（例如：時間，地點，參加者等）；
2．說明你打算參加的原因；
3．詢問對方的意向．
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Tom，
I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday．I want to join a Summer Camp．I wonder if you'd like to go with me．（高分句型一）
I want to tell you some details about the camp first．The camp will be held in my school next Saturday．And many other middle school students will take part in the camp as well．Therefore，we can communicate with each other very well．It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture．（高分句型二）If you are interested in it，let me know and I'll send you more information．（高分句型三）
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是李華，請給你的美國朋友Tom寫一封信，告訴他你打算參加暑期夏令營，希望他一起參加，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：介紹訓練營的相關內容（例如：時間，地點，參加者等）；說明你打算參加的原因；詢問對方的意向．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：the summer holiday暑假；Chinese culture中國文化；be interested in對…感興趣；the training camp 訓練營；
I wonder if you'd like to go with me．（高分句型一）
It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture．（高分句型二）If you are interested in it，let me know and I'll send you more information．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday．I want to join a Summer Camp．I wonder if you'd like to go with me．（高分句型一）
       I want to tell you some details about the camp first．The camp will be held in my school next Saturday．And many other middle school students will take part in the camp as well．Therefore，we can communicate with each other very well．It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture．（高分句型二）If you are interested in it，let me know and I'll send you more information．（高分句型三）
       Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer．
                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                           Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．