Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

Agony Aunt,

I’m quite annoyed these days. It started from the last Wednesday. I lost a 100-yuan note in the classroom this morning. I asked my deskmate causally if he had seen it. To my great surprise, he burst into angry. “What do you mean by that?” asked him. “I am poor, so I’m never a thief!” I immediately explained, but he simply doesn’t listen. I knew he was too angry at the moment, so I decided to wait a day and two till he cooled down. But he didn’t give me time: the next day, he went to the teacher and asked never be my deakmate no more. Help me, Agony Aunt. How should I do?

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Agony Aunt,

I’m quite annoyed these days. It started from last Wednesday. I lost a 100-yuan note in the classroom morning. I asked my deskmate causally if he had seen it. To my great surprise, he burst into. “What do you mean by that?” asked. “I am poor, I’m never a thief!”I immediately explained, but he simply listen. I knew he was too angry at the moment, so I decided to wait a day two till he cooled down. But he didn’t give me time: the next day, he went to the teacher and asked never be my deskmate more. Help me, Agony Aunt. should I do?

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【1】刪除the考查冠詞。句意：那開始于上周，星期之前若有last等限定詞后，不用定冠詞。

【2】this→that考查代詞。句意：那天早晨，我把筆記本弄丟了，本文敘述的是過去的事情，所以用過去的時間狀語。

【3】angry→anger考查名詞。句意：令我吃驚的是，他勃然大怒，burst into后跟名詞。

【4】him→he考查代詞。句意：他問，你什么意思呢？此處缺少主語，故用主格。

【5】so→but考查連詞。句意：我雖然窮，但我不是賊，前后形成轉折，故用but。

【6】doesn’t →didn’t考查動詞時態。句意：但是他根本不知道那是他是多嗎的生氣，at the moment一般過去是的時間狀語，故用didn’t。

【7】and→or考查連詞。句意：所以我決定等一到兩天直到他冷靜下來，故用or。

【8】加to考查動詞搭配。句意：要求老師從來不要成為我的同桌，ask sb to do sth意為“要求某人做某事”。

【9】no→any考查固定搭配。not ...any more意為“不再……”。

【10】how→what考查連詞。句意：我該如何做呢？此處缺少賓語，故用what。