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12．根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇征文．
《學(xué)生英文報》正在舉行“我的美麗家園”征文活動，請你用英語為該報寫一篇征文，介紹我們的家鄉(xiāng)-多彩貴州．標(biāo)題自擬，文章應(yīng)包括以下要點：
1．貴州的地理位置及概況；
2．宜人的氣候和清新的空氣；
3．美麗的風(fēng)景和其他你所了解的內(nèi)容．
要求：1．征文應(yīng)不少于80詞；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的個人信息．（貴州的地理位置及概況）I Love GuizhouGuizhou province is located in the southwest of China．Guizhou is very beautiful and simple．（宜人的氣候和清新的空氣）It has a pleasant climate and clean air．（美麗的風(fēng)景和其他內(nèi)容）Guizhou Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest，such as Huangguosh Waterfall，Qingyan Town and Jiaxiu Tower and so on．Huangguoshu Waterfall is located in the southwest of Anshun city，150 kilometers away from Guiyang．It is well known for its rapid and beautiful waterfall，which is clear and cool．It can excite visitors’imagination．Qingyan town is one of the four ancient towns in Guizhou，which was built 600 years ago，known as one of China's most attractive towns．I love my hometown-Guizhou．Welcome to Guizhou．．

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分析 這是一篇提示性作文．要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇征文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，寫作要點有1．貴州的地理位置及概況；2．宜人的氣候和清新的空氣；3．美麗的風(fēng)景和其他你所了解的內(nèi)容，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來．動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題．本文是介紹美麗的貴州，可以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，用第三人稱書寫．重點短語及句型有 is rich in，places of interest，It is well known for 等

解答 答案：（貴州的地理位置及概況）I Love GuizhouGuizhou province is located in the southwest of China．Guizhou is very beautiful and simple．（宜人的氣候和清新的空氣）It has a pleasant climate and clean air．（美麗的風(fēng)景和其他內(nèi)容）Guizhou Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest，such as Huangguosh Waterfall，Qingyan Town and Jiaxiu Tower and so on．Huangguoshu Waterfall is located in the southwest of Anshun city，150 kilometers away from Guiyang．It is well known for its rapid and beautiful waterfall，which is clear and cool．It can excite visitors’imagination．Qingyan town is one of the four ancient towns in Guizhou，which was built 600 years ago，known as one of China's most attractive towns．I love my hometown-Guizhou．Welcome to Guizhou．

點評 這是一篇提綱作文，抓住美麗貴州這個主題，要做到語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順．