Question

你的老師要求你以“My Dream Home”為題來談談自己的夢想家園。可根據(jù)下面提示的內(nèi)容適當發(fā)揮。

社區(qū)情況	鄰居很友好，他們有不同的技能，幫助我們解決各種難題。
周圍環(huán)境	附近有一個公園，人們可以在里面慢跑和散步。
房子概況	有兩層，有個大花園，可以在花園里種花。
內(nèi)部設施	有一個屬于自己的臥室……(至少寫一句話)

要求：1．語句通順、語言規(guī)范。2．書寫工整、標點符號正確，應適當發(fā)揮。

3．詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

 

Answer 1

My Dream Home

In my neighborhood ,my neighbors are friendly to each other. They have different kills and they often help us solve all kinds of problems. There is a park near my dream home. We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park. We all like it. There are two floors and a big garden in my house. In the garden , we can plant many flowers. It is very beautiful. There are two bedrooms,one is for my

parents ,the other is for me .

I like my dream room very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹介紹自己的夢想家園。應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。

【亮點說明】這篇小短文要點全面，并有適當發(fā)揮，基本沒有語法錯誤。

考點：表格作文。