Question

9．按要求完成大作文，詞數60-80詞．
健康是一個永恒的話題．班級將召開以"關注健康"為主題的班會，請你根據以下提示，寫一篇短文，談談你的看法和做法．
要點如下：1．Is it important to keep healthy？Why？2．What did you do in the past？
          3．What are you going to do to keep healthy？（至少寫出三條）
溫馨提示：1．書寫工整、規范，語言表達準確，語意通順、連貫，文中不得出現真實校名和姓名．
          2．文章必須包含提示的所有內容，可適當發揮．

I think it's very important to keep healthy．It can help us to live a happy life．
However，I didn't care about my health in the past．I hardly ever exercised．I didn't like eating vegetables．I liked junk food and ate it every day．I used to stay up and get up late．
I want to be healthy．Firstly，I'm going to exercise every day．Secondly，I'm going to eat more vegetables and fruit．And I will go to bed early．
I think we can take some other ways to keep healthy．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是談談健康的重要性和自己的將來的計劃．時態主要為一般過去時和一般將來時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．Is it important to keep healthy？Why？保持健康是否重要？為什么？
2．What did you do in the past？過去你怎么做的？
 3．What are you going to do to keep healthy？打算將來怎么做？
常用到的重點短語：
help sb to do sth 幫助某人做某事
care about 關心
hardly ever 幾乎不
stay up 熬夜
keep healthy 保持健康
【高分句型】
1．I think ①②it's very important to keep healthy．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語，keep healthy 保持健康

2．It can help us to live a happy life．
help sb to do sth 幫助某人做某事
3．I think ①we can take some other ways②to keep healthy
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②動詞不定式做后置定語，修飾ways．

解答 I think it's very important to keep healthy．【高分句型】It can help us to live a happy life．【高分句型】（保持健康是否重要？為什么？）
However，I didn't care about my health in the past．I hardly ever exercised．I didn't like eating vegetables．I liked junk food and ate it every day．I used to stay up and get up late．（過去你怎么做的？）
I want to be healthy．Firstly，I'm going to exercise every day．Secondly，I'm going to eat more vegetables and fruit．And I will go to bed early．（將來怎么做）
I think we can take some other ways to keep healthy．【高分句型】

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應在內心構思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當的詞語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內容．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．