Question

2．你去過動物園嗎？請根據下列問題所給的信息，寫一篇80詞左右的短文．
1．When did you go to the zoo？2．Who went to the zoo with you？
3．What animals did you see？4．What animals do you like best？Why？
5．Did you feed any animals？6．Are zoos good for animals？Why？
My Trip to the Zoo
Last Sunday，I visited the zoo in our city with my classmates．We got up early and met at the outside of school gate at 6 o'clock．Then we went there by bus．Half an hour later，we arrived at the zoo．We saw many animals such as tigers，elephants，monkeys and so on．Among them we liked the monkeys best．They are very lovely．Time went quickly．Soon it was time to have lunch．We had a picnic under a big tree．We didn't feed the animals，I think it is not a place for the animals to live in because they are not free．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Among them we liked the monkeys best because they are very lovely．其中我們最喜歡猴子因為它們很可愛．這是because引導的原因狀語從句，因為…．
 高分句型二
Soon it was time to have lunch．很快就到吃午飯的時間了． it was time to do sth．該做…事情了．

解答 Last Sunday，I visited the zoo in our city with my classmates．【要點一和二，去動物園的時間和和誰去動物園】We got up early and met at the outside of school gate at 6 o'clock．Then we went there by bus．Half an hour later，we arrived at the zoo．We saw many animals such as tigers，elephants，monkeys and so on．【要點三，看見了什么動物】Among them we liked the monkeys best because they are very lovely【高分句型一，注意狀語從句的使用】．Time went quickly．Soon it was time to have lunch【高分句型二，注意it was time to do sth．的使用】．We had a picnic under a big tree．【要點四，最喜歡什么動物】We didn't feed the animals，【要點五，有沒有喂動物】I think it is not a place for the animals to live in because they are not free．【要點六，動物園對動物好嗎】

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