Question

16．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"I want to recommend a good book to …"．（ 以"我想要給…推薦一本好書"為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格．
（ 注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分．）
Some words for reference （僅供參考）
•Who…？
•What…？
•Why…？
A good book is a good friend．I'd like to introduce a good book Harry Potter to my cousin Tom．
Harry Potter is a series of seven fantasy novels written by British author J．K．Rowling．The book tells us the adventures of Harry Potter and his friends from the Hogwarts School．Although the characters are complex，we get attached to them easily and feel for their pain and happiness．What's more，it makes people think what they should do for the people they love and what is really important in life【高分句型】．
My cousin Tom is a little boy who is crazy about magic tales and stories．Harry Potter can show him a fascinating world and inspire his imagination．The strong and lovely characters can help him build his own personality．I'm sure he can also learn about love and friendship from the book【高分句型】．
I do hope Tom will like the book and my recommendation can help him．

Answer 1

分析 重點短語：
1．pain and happiness痛苦與歡樂
2．What's more更重要的是
3．show him a fascinating world 給他展示一個精彩的世界
高分句型：
【高分句型一】it makes people think what they should do for the people they love and what is really important in life．它使人們思考應該為他們所愛的人做什么，什么才是生活中真正重要的東西．（make sb．do sth．使某人做某事）
【高分句型二】I'm sure he can also learn about love and friendship from the book．
我確信他還可以從書中學習到有關愛和友情的東西．（I'm sure+從句"我確信…"）

解答 A good book is a good friend．I'd like to introduce a good book Harry Potter to my cousin Tom．
   Harry Potter is a series of seven fantasy novels written by British author J．K．Rowling．The book tells us the adventures of Harry Potter and his friends from the Hogwarts School．Although the characters are complex，we get attached to them easily and feel for their pain and happiness．What's more，it makes people think what they should do for the people they love and what is really important in life【高分句型】．
  My cousin Tom is a little boy who is crazy about magic tales and stories．Harry Potter can show him a fascinating world and inspire his imagination．The strong and lovely characters can help him build his own personality．I'm sure he can also learn about love and friendship from the book【高分句型】．
   I do hope Tom will like the book and my recommendation can help him．

點評 考生需根據所提供的信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細構思寫作結構，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．