Question

10．下面4幅圖片描述的是星期天上午在Sunshine Park里發(fā)生的-一件事．請根據(jù)圖片把
提供的信息用英語為你校的"英語園地"寫一篇短文．
注意：1．短文須包括所有圖片的主要內(nèi)容，短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；
2．詞數(shù)：90詞左右；
3．參考詞匯：貨攤stand n．；搶奪snatch  v．；逮捕arrest v．
One Sunday morning，there were some people in Sunshine Park．                                

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away．當一個婦女正在買冰淇淋時，身后的一個年輕人搶走了她的手提包． 這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．
高分句型二
There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby．有一個老人靜靜地坐在長椅上．這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．

解答 One Sunday morning，there were some people in Sunshine Park．At a stand，a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】【要點一，介紹第一個圖片】．Hearing the shouting"stop him"，a few people began to run after him．【要點二，介紹第二個圖片】There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby【高分句型二，注意there be 句型的使用】．a(chǎn)s the snatcher was running past him，the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatcher's legs，so the young man fell down on the ground【要點三，介紹第三個圖片】．Soon two policemen came in a police car and arrested him．At last，the woman thanked the old man，and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness．【要點四，介紹第四個圖片】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．