Question

8．根據提示，簡要介紹你好朋友Jack的成長變化，80詞左右．
提示：1．外貌：過去個子矮、瘦小，短發．
現在個子高，長發．
2．性格：過去害羞、內向，不敢主動跟別人談話．
現在幽默、外向，喜歡講笑話，擅長與別人交流．
3．愛好：以前喜歡彈鋼琴、看書和散步．
現在喜歡打籃球，看電視，參加各種活動．
要求：不要逐字逐句翻譯，內容要合理通順，可以適當發揮．
Jack is my good friendJack is my good friend．He has changed a lot in the last few years．He used to be short，but now he ismuch taller than before．He used to have short hair，but now his hair is long．He used to be shy andquiet，he was afraid of speaking in front of others．But now he is a little outgoing and funny．He has made quite a few friends．He likes telling jokes and is good at communicating．He used to like playing the piano，reading and having a walk．But now he enjoys playing basketball，watching TV．He usually join all kinds of activities．
What great changes he has！．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He used to be short，but now he is much taller than before他過去個子矮，但是現在比以前要高的多．
used to do 過去常常
【高分句型二】
What great changes he has！他的改變真大啊！
what修飾名詞或名詞短語，有以下兩種形式：1．What+a（an）+（形容詞）+單數可數名詞+主語+謂語！或是：What+名詞詞組+主語+謂語！2．What+（形容詞）+可數名詞復數或不可數名詞+主語+謂語！

解答 Jack is my good friend．He has changed a lot in the last few years．He used to be short，but now he is much taller than before．【高分句型一】He used to have short hair，but now his hair is long．（外貌）He used to be shy and quiet，he was afraid of speaking in front of others．But now he is a little outgoing and funny．He has made quite a few friends．He likes telling jokes and is good at communicating．（性格）He used to like playing the piano，reading and having a walk．But now he enjoys playing basketball，watching TV．He usually join all kinds of activities．（愛好）What great changes he has！【高分句型二】

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