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書面表達（15分）
光華中學(xué)準備采取一些措施減輕學(xué)生的負擔(dān)，于是向?qū)W生廣泛征集意見。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)下面要求向?qū)W校提交一份減負的建議。
要求：1.所提措施有理有據(jù)，能確實起到減輕學(xué)生負擔(dān)的作用；
2.能適當?shù)亍⒄�確地運用一般將來時和形容詞的比較等級；
3.80個單詞左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Headmaster,
I am glad to hear that you will lighten(減輕) the burden(負擔(dān)) of us students. ______________________________
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Yours 
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear headmaster,
I am glad to hear that you will lighten the burden of us students. It’s true that we have too heavy a burden of study every day. It makes us feel stressed out. I hope you will let the teachers give us less homework every day, so we will have more time to relax ourselves. Can we have fewer Chinese, English and math classes a day? Can we have more music, art and PE classes a week? Can we have more time to enjoy our hobbies? I think if we are asked to spend les time on study, we will pay more attention to it. That’s my advice. I hope they can come true.
Yours, 
Li Hua

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