Question

12．假設(shè)你是張麗，是家住四川蘆山地震災(zāi)區(qū)林娜的筆友．她給你發(fā)來了一封電子郵件，請看后給她回復(fù)，針對她的問題給她一些建議，并談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ?br />

Dear Zhang Li， I have been so sad these days．As you know，an earthquake happened in my hometown and both my parents died．Though the government gives us much help，my little sister and I cried every night because of missing，and I don't want to learn anything．I find it hard to talk with the people around．Life is dark for me without parents'love! What should I do？I really need your help． Yours， Lin Na

Dear Lin Na， I'm so sorry to hear the sad news． I understand you．.Everyone need parents'love．But when they leave the world，we must learn to take care of ourselves and face the difficulties bravely． So please stop crying and try your best to study harder to get a better future．Besides，you should take good care of your sister and help her live a happy life．What's more，it's useful to talk about your problems with the people around you．And my parents and I can also help you． I think it's important for you to be strong and brave．I believe you will be better soon． I hope what I said can help you． Yours， Zhang Li

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是給家住四川蘆山地震災(zāi)區(qū)林娜回信，針對她的問題給她一些建議，并談?wù)勀愕南敕�，注意信件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、二人稱．
琳娜的來信大意是：父母在地震中身亡，雖然父母給力大力支持，但是我和我的妹妹因為想念父母，每晚都哭泣，我也不想學(xué)習(xí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)很難和身邊的人交流，沒有父母的生活是黑暗的，我該怎么辦？
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．學(xué)會照顧自己，勇敢面對；
2．努力學(xué)習(xí)，照顧妹妹；和身邊的人交流
3．堅強勇敢很重要
常用到的重點短語：
take care of 照顧
stop doing sth 停止做某事
try one's best to do sth 盡力做某事
what's more 再者
【高分句型】
1．But ①when they leave the world，we must learn to②take care of ourselves and face the difficulties bravely．
①when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
②take care of 照顧
2．So please①stop crying and ②try your best to study harder③to get a better future．
①stop doing sth 停止做某事
②try one's best to do sth 盡力做某事
③動詞不定式做目的狀語．
3．I think ①②it's important for you to be strong and brave．
①think后省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 Dear Lin Na，
I'm so sorry to hear the sad news．
I understand you．Everyone need parents'love．But when they leave the world，we must learn to take care of ourselves and face the difficulties bravely．【高分句型】（學(xué)會照顧自己，勇敢面對）
So please stop crying and try your best to study harder to get a better future．【高分句型】Besides，you should take good care of your sister and help her live a happy life．What's more，it's useful to talk about your problems with the people around you．And my parents and I can also help you．（努力學(xué)習(xí)，照顧妹妹，和身邊的人交流）
I think it's important for you to be strong and brave．【高分句型】（堅強勇敢很重要）I believe you will be better soon．
I hope what I said can help you．
Yours，
Zhang Li

點評 本本文難度不大，一般都有話可說，寫作過程中寫作條理性要把握好，對于自己所提出的建議，寫的過程中通過變換句式和用詞上來提高語言的美度．在一件事情寫完后要用上表關(guān)系的連接詞，或平時積累的各類表遞進、并列的連詞來是文章富于活力．在平時的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對表達好的句子，短語要進行積累，并默寫，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無患．