Question

你有沒有感覺到自己的家鄉(xiāng)每天都在變化？以前低矮的平房變成了美麗的高樓，狹窄的小路變成了寬廣的公路，破舊的居民區(qū)變成了賞心悅目的花園……請拿起你的筆，記錄下家鄉(xiāng)日新月異的變化吧！
要求：
1．寫出過去的家鄉(xiāng)情景。
2．描述現(xiàn)在的美景。
3．指出這些變化給我們帶來方便的同時又引發(fā)了哪些問題。
4．不少于100詞。
Changes in my hometown
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Answer 1

Changes in my hometown
I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There was no tall building and the only street was narrow. Just outside the town， there was a river. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People here lived a simple life.
Great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings， big department stores and factories everywhere. Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets. But with the development of the industry， we have fewer trees. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.

試題分析：是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹家鄉(xiāng)變化的短文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意文中要適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的感想。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般過去時、現(xiàn)在完成時以及一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，文章就是要通過這種時間的變化來體現(xiàn)家鄉(xiāng)變化的。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文的所選題目，就發(fā)生在學(xué)生的身邊，比較接近學(xué)生的生活，這樣學(xué)生寫起來有話可說。文中正確運(yùn)用了三種時態(tài)來描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化，很真實(shí)生動；對家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展中存在的問題見解比較深刻；另外在遣詞造句，連詞運(yùn)用等方面都可圈可點(diǎn)。
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