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11．從小學到初中，從初一到初三我們每一個人都會或多或少發生了變化：我們的身體長高了，變得更結實．我們的性格也會不同程度的變化，也許更開朗，更活潑…..我們學到了更多的知識，明白了更多的道理…．
請以"Different Me"為題寫一篇字數不少于70的英語作文．（文中不得出現真實的人名，校名）
I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．
However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．過去，我太害羞了不敢在他人面前說話．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能．
【高分句型二】
I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．我學習如此好以至于現在我是班上最好的．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引導的結果狀語從句．

解答 Different Me
I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．
      In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】（性格內向，不敢在人前講話）I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects（對學習不感興趣，成績不好）．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．（不愛運動，沉迷電腦游戲）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（樂于分享，與同學相處很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型二】（各科成績優異）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（積極參加各類活動）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．（暑假計劃）

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