Question

親愛的同學(xué)，暑期已經(jīng)結(jié)束，你度過(guò)了一個(gè)輕松愉快的假期。是如何度過(guò)一個(gè)有意義的假期？請(qǐng)寫出來(lái)與大家分享。

Some ideas	plan the time carefully keep a balance between…and… …
Play the time friends do different sports do some reading …

要求：

1. 文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

3. 詞數(shù)：90 詞左右（開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

The summer holiday is coming. We will have plenty of time to enjoy ourselves.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

The summer holiday is coming. We will have plenty of time to enjoy ourselves. But I think we should plan the time carefully. We had better make a list of all the things we wish to do and try hard to keep a balance between work and play.

In the holiday we can do many activities. For example, we can play with friends. We can do different sports. It is also meaningful for us to work as volunteers. Besides, we can do some reading. It can help get us prepared for the new term.

I hope all of us will have a wonderful holiday.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文作者介紹了假期的計(jì)劃，以及作者是如何合理安排時(shí)間，作者是怎樣在工作和娛樂(lè)中保持平衡的，文中用到了很多好詞好句：如: We had better make a list of all the things we wish to do and try hard to keep a balance between work and play. 等, 為文章增色不少學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。