Question

假設(shè)你是李華，下周你校將舉辦藝術(shù)節(jié)。請根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，給你在英國的筆友Alice寫一封信，向她介紹一下你們準(zhǔn)備的藝術(shù)節(jié)節(jié)目。

Who	What
Bill	perform magic tricks
Ann and Kate	dance to disco
Linda, Lily, Lucy and Helen	model the clothes
I	…

要求：1. 語句通順，語法正確，涵蓋所給提示并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 詞數(shù)70左右。（所給開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Alice,

I’m sorry I didn’t write to you at once, though I heard from you last week. These days I’m very busy because our school will

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Does your school have an art festival? Please write soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Alice,

I’m sorry I didn’t write to you at once, though I heard from you last week. These days I’m very busy because our school will hold an art festival .We are now preparing for it .For example ,Bill will perform magic tricks .His dream is to be a man like Liu Qian in the future ,Ann and Kate like dancing .They plan to dance to disco.Linda ,Lily ,Lucy and Helen will model the clothes .The clothes look really beautiful and the music sounds exciting .As for me,I am good at English ,So I want to sing an English song .I hope our art festival will succeed .

Does your school have an art festival ,Please write soon!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。本文主要用到了將來時(shí)，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，并列舉了在藝術(shù)節(jié)他們班上的學(xué)生分別表演什么節(jié)目We are now preparing for it；I hope our art festival will succeed .這些句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。