Question

1．假設(shè)你叫Zhang Ling，前些天收到筆友Dave的e-mail．信中說(shuō)他不久要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)中文．
他想了解如何學(xué)好中文．請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)一封e-mail，提出一些如何學(xué)好中文的建議．
內(nèi)容要求：（1）中文有用，外國(guó)人對(duì)它感興趣，學(xué)習(xí)它；
（2）中英文不同，學(xué)習(xí)困難；
（3）學(xué)好中文的建議：多記憶、多讀寫(xiě)、看電視、聽(tīng)廣播、找人交流等．
（4）不僅能從書(shū)中學(xué)到，也能通過(guò)其他方法學(xué)好中文．
要求：（1）必須用上以上所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）要求句子連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
（3）詞數(shù)不少于80詞，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（4）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息．
參考詞匯：：useful，foreigner，different from，difficult，learn…．by heart，listen to the radio，
not only…．but also．
Dear Dave，
I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．
（中文的有用性）Chinese is becoming more and more useful．Many foreigners are interested in it and studying it now．（與英文不同）It may be difficult for you because it's really different from English．（建議）You have to learn more Chinese words by heart．It's also important to do some reading and writing．You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening．It's a good way to catch （get ） every chance to talk in Chinese．You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you．If you have any questions，please Let me know．I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well．
Hope to see you soon．
Yours，
Zhang Ling．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇材料作文．經(jīng)過(guò)審題，我們知道要以"How to learn Chinese well"為主旨的一封建議性的信件．其主要內(nèi)容是闡述怎樣才能學(xué)好中文，作者要給出合理的建議，這是文章的重點(diǎn)．其要點(diǎn)主要為4小點(diǎn)，注意在文章中這4點(diǎn)必須都包括，除了這4點(diǎn)，還可以適當(dāng)做出補(bǔ)充．要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右．由于是給別人提出一些建議，所以時(shí)態(tài)確定為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)根據(jù)文章的需要可主要確定為第二人稱(chēng)．重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)及句型：more and more useful，are interested in，different from，It's a good way to，not only…but also 等

解答 Dear Dave，
I'm glad you'll come to China to learn Chinese．（中文的有用性）Chinese is becoming more and more useful．Many foreigners are interested in it and studying it now．（與英文不同）It may be difficult for you because it's really different from English．（建議）You have to learn more Chinese words by heart．It's also important to do some reading and writing．You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening．It's a good way to catch （get ） every chance to talk in Chinese．You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you．If you have any questions，please Let me know．I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well．．
Hope to see you soon．
Yours，
Zhang Ling．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此為材料作文．作文時(shí)要嚴(yán)格按照要求去組織文章，要抓住文章的重點(diǎn)，分層次條理清楚的表達(dá)出來(lái)．在闡述時(shí)要注意態(tài)度明確，不能模棱兩可；要使用一些表示順序的詞，使層次更清晰，論述更到位．文章中要多使用一些表達(dá)建議的句子，注意多使用一些不同的表達(dá)方法，避免文章過(guò)于單調(diào)．結(jié)構(gòu)上要注意首尾呼應(yīng)．盡量避免一些單詞，語(yǔ)法等的錯(cuò)誤．