Question

17．著名作家 Francis Bacon曾說過："Reading makes a full man．"可見，閱讀對每個人的成長有著舉足輕重的作用．請你根據以下提示信息，結合自己的觀點，寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文，談談閱讀的好處、可讀的材料和你的閱讀計劃．
要求：句子結構準確，要點齊全，內容合理．

Why do we need to read？	To get knowledge，be more intelligent，learn a foreign language
What can we need？	Books，newspapers，magazines…
What's your reading plan？	To read every day，read in my spare time， Read…books every year…

Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．
Books，newspapers，magazines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person．
I will insist on readingevery day in the future．I will also read a book every week．I believe we cando this．So I strongly suggest that we should have Reading Day in China．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容以"Reading Makes a Full Man"為題表達你對閱讀的看法和計劃．時態主要為一般現在時和一般將來時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1為什么我們需要閱讀？
2我們能讀什么？
3我的閱讀計劃
常用到的重點短語：
not only …but also…不僅…而且…
make sb+adj讓某人怎樣
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
at least最少
spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事

【高分句型】
1．It can ①not only open our minds but also ②make us more intelligent．
①not only …but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個并列成分．
②make sb+adj讓某人怎樣
2．①Besides，②reading is also ③one of the most important ways ④to learn a foreign language ⑤like English．
①besides 另外，引出下一觀點．
②動名詞reading做主語，謂語動詞用單數is．
③one of+the+最高級+名詞復數，表示最怎么樣的…之一．
④動詞不定式做后置定語，修飾前面的ways．
⑤like表示例如，給出例子．
3．So I strongly suggest that we should have Reading Day in China．
that 引導的賓語從句，作為suggest的賓語．

解答 Reading Makes a Full Man
       Reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．【高分句型】Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．【高分句型】（為什么我們需要閱讀？）      
Books，newspapers，magazines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person．（讀什么）
      I will insist on readingevery day in the future．I will also read a book every week．I believe we cando this．So I strongly suggest that we should have Reading Day in China．【高分句型】（閱讀計劃）

點評 初中英語的作文，著重考察學生連詞成句的能力，要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面．在對所出現的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式．對于中學作文的寫作，盡量將所學的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結構緊湊的文章，不要出現中式英文．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文．