Question

在你成長的過程中，難免會遇到父母外出，你獨自在家的情況。某國際學校的英語論壇正在舉辦關于這個話題的討論，請你發一個帖子參與交流，談談父母外出時，你自己度過的一次經歷，并就此事談談你的感想和體會。

    提示詞語：out, alone, cook, come back, happy, take care of, depend on

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Everyone may have the experience to stay alone while his or her parents are out.

One day last year, both of my parents went out for their business. So I had to live on my own. I went to school and came back home as usual. I cooked dinner for myself, did my homework carefully, and went to bed on time. When my parents came back, they were happy to see I was able to take good care of myself!

I think we shouldn’t depend too much on our parents, but learn to stand on our own feet. Nothing is impossible if we try our best.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現在時態進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: have to不得不；live on靠……生活；as usual像往常一樣；on time按時；take care of照顧；try one’s best盡力等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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