Question

書面表達。（10分）
某英文網站提出“走路去上學”的倡議，請你就這一話題寫一篇約80詞的英語文章。內容包括：走路有利健康，和朋友結伴而行有利于……，讓父母節省……，使城市……等；可適當發揮。
注意：文中不得出現真實人名、校名的相關信息。
參考詞匯：be good for, with friends,save

Answer 1

I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for our health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，一封倡議書。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮，確定時態主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上，為了讓表達更符合邏輯，可以適當使用序數詞；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內容發揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。