Question

16．健康一直是人們關注的問題，你校要舉行以"關愛健康"為主題的班會，請你根據下面的內容提示寫一篇發言稿．
提示：1．保持健康的重要性；2．保持健康的方法：多吃水果、蔬菜，每天鍛煉一個小時，早睡早起，勤洗手； 3．談談自己的看法（至少一條）．
要求：1．文中不能出現真實的校名和姓名； 2．內容可適當發揮； 3．詞數為60-80詞（開頭和結尾給出的不計數中）．
Boys and girls，
Growing up healthily is our duty．Every one of us should try our best to keep ourselves healthy．
First of all，keep a balanced diet．We should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day．Don't eat junk food．Drink water instead of cola
Secondly，get enough sleep and enough exercise．Early to bed and early to rise help a lot to our health． Try to sleep eight or nine hours every night．Try to exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves by listening to light music．
Besides the physical health，we also need friendship．We should try to get along well with people around us．We can share our problems and happiness with them．And we should often communicate with our parents and teachers．Communication plays an important part in our life．
A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Try to exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves by listening to light music．
本句是一個祈使句，是and連接的兩個并列句，表示提出建議．at least至少，by doing sth表示通過某種方式作方式狀語．
【高分句型二】
Besides the physical health，we also need friendship．
besides是介詞，表示除…之外（還有），本句承上啟下．

解答 Boys and girls，
Growing up healthily is our duty．Every one of us should try our best to keep ourselves healthy．（健康重要）
First of all，keep a balanced diet．We should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day．Don't eat junk food．Drink water instead of cola（飲食）．
Secondly，get enough sleep and enough exercise．Early to bed and early to rise help a lot to our health． Try to sleep eight or nine hours every night．Try to exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves by listening to light music．【高分句型一】we should wash hands as often as possible（鍛煉一個小時，早睡早起，勤洗手）
Besides the physical health，we also need friendship．【高分句型二】We should try to get along well with people around us．We can share our problems and happiness with them．And we should often communicate with our parents and teachers．Communication plays an important part in our life．（自己的看法）
A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily．
Thank you!

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現障礙．可根據內容要點提示運用相關的句型結構靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．