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16．新教育實驗在各個學校正進行得如火如荼．為建設書香校園，你校即將開展"讀好書，促成長"的活動，請你根據這次活動的主題，向全校同學發出倡議，請根據表格中所給的信息，用英語寫一篇100個單詞左右的倡議書．

讀書的意義	獲知識，增長見識，使人聰明，使人快樂，有助于學習，有助于成長．
目前的狀況	玩手機、聽音樂、看電視、上網等占去了學生大部份課余時間．
發出倡議	多讀書，讀好書，寫讀書筆記．

注意：（1）倡議書的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
（2）倡議書須包括所有內容要點，行文連貫，表達清楚，書寫規范．
My dear friends，
As we all know，reading is very important in our life．We canget knowledge through reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier．Our study can be improved if we read more books．Reading also helps us grow as a person．However，it's a great pity that many activities such as playing with the smarthphone，listening to music，watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time．So here，I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books．When you read books，you had better take some notes．It will do us good!Let's start reading now!．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Our study will be improved if we read more books．如果我們多讀書，學習成績就會提高．這是if引導的條件狀語從句，主句是一般將來時，從句用的是一般現在時．
高分句型二
When you read books，you had better take some notes．  當你讀的時候，你最好做一些筆記．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．

解答 My dear friends，
As we all know，reading is very important in our life．
We can get  knowledge through reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier．Our study will be improved if we read more books【高分句型一，注意if引導的條件狀語從句的使用】．Reading also helps us grow up．【要點一，讀書的意義】However，it's a great pity that many activities such as playing with the smarthphone，listening to music，watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time．【要點二，目前的狀況】So here，I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books．When you read books，you had better take some notes．【高分句型二，注意時間狀語從句的使用】It will be good for us!Let's start reading now!【要點三，發出倡議】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．