Question

你校的學生會正在選擇舉下一屆學生會主席。你覺得Cathy是合適人選。根據下表內容寫一封推薦信介紹她的情況。
注意：1.短文應包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮；
2.100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

Name	Cathy
Age	16
Star Sign	Aries
Personalities	自信、精力充沛、積極向上、樂于助人（舉一例），有創新精神
Favorite colour	黃色,因為它代表智慧和熱情
Interests and hobbies	喜歡看雜志，玩電腦，癡迷于足球，英語考試得滿分，上學期寫作比賽一等獎。
Shortcomings(缺點)	數學不太好，在上面花費較少的時間，他說他將盡力……

Dear Sir：
We’re writing to recommend Cathy as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.
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In a word, he has all the qualities to be a chairperson. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely
Zhang Ming

Answer 1

She is 16 years old .Her star sign is Aries. She is confident and energetic. She is also active and always ready to help others. She shows the Grade 9 students how to use the library. She is creative and imaginative enough to come up with new ideas. She likes yellow best, as it represents wisdom and warmth. She likes reading magazines and playing computer games .She also get full marks in English exams. Last term she won the first prize. However, she doesn’t do well in maths, she spends less time on it. She says she will try her best to learn it well.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一封推薦信友。本文做給材料比較詳細，動筆前先根據材料確定時態，句式，詞匯等主要內容。根據內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，人稱應該是第三人稱。寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達的多樣化，做到語意連貫符合邏輯。
點評：在寫書面表達是首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應注意動詞的英語，根據不同的人稱確定動詞的形式；再次，句型應該符合英語的表達習慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。