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6．《21世紀英語報》正在舉行英語征文比賽，請你以"Great Changes in Wenzhou"為題寫一篇文章參加征文比賽，要點如下：
1．使用公共自行車，…，改善了交通；   
2．建設更多的公園，…，美化了環(huán)境；
3．公共場所不吸煙，…，人們更文明了； 4）…
要求：1．文章應包含以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息；
3．文章長度約100詞．
參考詞匯：public bikes； traffic； environment； public place； more civilized（更文明的）
Great changes in Wenzhou
　　More than twenty years ago，Wenzhou was just a small，old and poor town．Most of people were farmers．There were few factories．The people didn't have enough food to eat and wore old clothes．They had a hard life．
　　Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years．The people have found a lot of ways of making money．Now there are many tall buildings．They are very beautiful．Roads are wide and clean．People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work．The government has provided free public bikes，which has brought convenience to people's travel，but also greatly improved the traffic in the city．
Many people have cell phones and personal computers．People's living conditions have improved a lot．More parks have been built to improve people's quality of life and beautify the environment．
With the improvement of people's living standards，more and more public places do not smoke，people are more civilized．Thanks to the government's efforts．Wenzhou is becoming more and more beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：The government has provided free public bikes，which has brought convenience to people's travel，but also greatly improved the traffic in the city政府提供了免費的公共自行車，這給人們的出行帶來了方便，也極大地改善了城市的交通．先行詞是 public bikes，which引導的非限制性定語從句．
句型二：Wenzhou is becoming more and more beautiful 溫州變得越來越美麗．more and more越來越…

解答 Great changes in Wenzhou
　　More than twenty years ago，Wenzhou was just a small，old and poor town．Most of people were farmers．There were few factories．The people didn't have enough food to eat and wore old clothes．They had a hard life．
　　Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years．The people have found a lot of ways of making money．Now there are many tall buildings．They are very beautiful．Roads are wide and clean．People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work．The government has provided free public bikes，which has brought convenience to people's travel，but also greatly improved the traffic in the city．（使用公共自行車，改善了交通）【高分句型一】
      Many people have cell phones and personal computers．People's living conditions have improved a lot．More parks have been built to improve people's quality of life and beautify the environment．（建設更多的公園，美化了環(huán)境）
      With the improvement of people's living standards，don't smoke in the public places，people are more civilized．（公共場所不吸煙，人們更文明了）Thanks to the government's efforts．Wenzhou is becoming more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】

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