Question

19．在英語課堂上，老師要求學(xué)生就"與人相處"的話題展開小組討論．請根據(jù)以下你所在的小組的討論結(jié)果，以"How to Get on Well with Others"為題，寫一篇英語短文．

Suggestions	•Learn to share •Respect（尊重） others •Communicate with each other •…
My suggestions	…

注意：
1．詞數(shù)80～100；2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來．動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
高分句型：
①First，we should learn to share．首先，我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會分享．句子考查了短語learn to do sth學(xué)會做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式形式．
②Our class had a discussion about how to get on well with others in an English   lesson last week．我們班上星期在英語課上討論了如何與人相處的問題．句子中ahout是個介詞，后面how引導(dǎo)的不定式短語在這里作賓語；get on well with 和…相處融洽．

解答 How to get on well with others
How to Get on Well with Others？Our class had a discussion about how to get on well with others in an English   lesson last week．（高分句型）We all gave our suggestions．（引出話題）First，we should learn to share（高分句型）．We should share our happiness as well as sadness with others．（學(xué)會分享）Second，We should respect others．That is very important．Only when we respect others can we gain respect from them．（尊重他人）Third，communicate with others．Communication can get away the misunderstanding between the people．（和他人交流）
In my opinion，besides the suggestions above，we should get ready to help and show our love and care to them when they are in trouble．In addition，be kind and friendly．Always keep a smile on your face when talking with others．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．如：get on well with others和其他人相處得好；learn to share 學(xué)會分享；communicate with others與他人交流．we should get ready to help and show our love and care to them when they are in trouble．當(dāng)他身處困境的時候，我們應(yīng)準(zhǔn)備幫助并給他們我們的愛和關(guān)心．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．