Question

根據(jù)下列表格，介紹Mary 和Tom 做志愿者的情況。

name	Dream job	What do they do	Their feeling（感受）
Mary	護士	每個星期天到第一醫(yī)院當(dāng)志愿者。幫忙照顧生病的孩子。給孩子們唱歌或講故事而讓孩子們高興起來。	感到快樂。在做自己喜歡事情的同時還能幫助別人。
Tom	體育老師	喜歡打籃球，在5歲的時候就會打籃球了。周末的時候到學(xué)校教孩子打球。	學(xué)到很多有關(guān)如何關(guān)心孩子，且在學(xué)校當(dāng)志愿者能幫助他獲得夢想中的工作。

Students who volunteer

Mary and Tom are my good friends. They are volunteers in our school. We should learn from them. They give up several hours each week to help others.

Mary……..

 

 

Tom………..

 

 

 

Answer 1

Students who volunteer

Mary and Tom are my good friends. They are volunteers in our school. We should learn from them. They give up several hours each week to help others.

Mary wants to be a nurse. She volunteers in No. 1 Hospital every Sunday. She helps to care for sick kids . she sings songs or tells stories to cheer them up. She feels happy. She can do what she loves to do and help others at the same time.

Tom’s dream job is to be a PE teacher. He likes playing basketball very much. He could play basketball at the age of 15. He goes to school to teach kids how to play basketball. He learns a lot about how to care for children. And volunteering there can help him to get his future dream job.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要寫瑪麗和湯姆的夢想。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如care for,cheer them up,at the same time, likes playing,at the age of,a lot，learns about等短語，文中還用到了賓語從句 what she loves to do and help others at the same time；不定式做賓語 to be a nurse；不定式做表語to be a PE teacher；疑問詞加不定式做賓語how to play basketball，how to care for children；文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。

考點：提綱作文