Question

你班計劃舉行一次以“My dream job”為話題的英文主題班會課，老師要求每位同學寫一篇短文，分享各自的“夢想”，內容包括以下幾個方面：

1．你夢想做什么工作；

2．你選擇這個工作的理由；

3．你為實現這個夢想要做的準備。

注意：1．內容可適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順；詞數70。開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

2．短文中不要出現具體的學校姓名和人名。

My dream job

Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job?

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Answer 1

Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job? My dream is to be a doctor in the future. I think it’s a great and interesting job. Because first I can help many patients. It’s a hard job but I don’t mind it. I can find some joy in this job. Second I think I can also help myself and my family If I can become a doctor in the future so I like my job.Third I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to be a doctor. Besides ,I can meet different people in my job every day and I can learn something from them. And I would like to hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor. I believe I can be a good doctor

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to be a doctor .I would like to hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor等，Because等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點：話題作文。