Question

9．假如你叫Tom，在北京第八中學(xué)讀書，你在這里交了許多朋友．你認(rèn)為經(jīng)常鍛煉能保持健康，你最大的興趣是打籃球，經(jīng)常在周末和朋友們一起打籃球，下個(gè)月學(xué)校將舉行籃球比賽，你打算參加，并且希望你們班取得第一名．你長大后的心愿是成為一名籃球運(yùn)動員．請根據(jù)以上信息，寫一篇70詞左右的作文．
I'm Tom，and I study in No.8 Middle School in Beijing．I have many friends here．I think exercising more can keep healthy．So I often play sports．What interests me most is playing basketball．I usually play with my friends on weekends．Our school will hold a basketball match next month．I'm going to join，and I hope our classwill win．When I grow up，I want to be a basketball player like Kobe．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think exercising more can keep healthy我認(rèn)為多鍛煉能保持健康．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
When I grow up，I want to be a basketball player like Kobe當(dāng)我長大了，我想成為像科比一樣的籃球運(yùn)動員．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．

解答 I'm Tom，and I study in No.8 Middle School in Beijing．（個(gè)人信息）I have many friends here．I think exercising more can keep healthy．【高分句型一】So I often play sports．What interests me most is playing basketball．I usually play with my friends on weekends．（愛好）Our school will hold a basketball match next month．I'm going to join，and I hope our class will win．When I grow up，I want to be a basketball player like Kobe．【高分句型二】（夢想）

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