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根據(jù)下面圖畫用英語寫一篇日記，描述你6月4日星期三下午放學(xué)回家路上發(fā)生的事情．

注意：

1．日記必須包括所有圖畫內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；使日記連貫．

2．你是畫中的女學(xué)生：．

3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右．

Answer 1

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學(xué)生：習(xí)作： 　　May 4th Thursday Rainy 　　This afternoon, when I walked out from(X1) the school, the weather changed. Dark clouds were coming. It soon started to rain. Just as I was hurrying to(X2) home, ∧(X3). I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned round and found it was Lan Mei. She had a(X4) umbrella with her and asked me to use it with her. She walked all the way with me to my home. 　　剖析：1．從……走出、取出、拿出，應(yīng)用介詞of，即“walk out of…”． 　　2．副詞home、here、there前一般不用介詞，所以此處to應(yīng)去掉． 　　3．home后少一個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)holding my bag on my head，作was hurrying home的伴隨狀態(tài)． 　　4．umbrella是以元音音素開頭的，所以a應(yīng)改為an． 　　總評：本文行文流暢，語言簡練，但不足之處是少了一個(gè)要點(diǎn)holding my bag on my head．