Question

18．歲月如梭，你一定有很多收獲、經(jīng)歷和感悟，這些財(cái)富時(shí)刻伴隨著你的成長(zhǎng)．請(qǐng)就the Two Most Valuable Things為題，介紹兩件在生命或生活中你認(rèn)為最有價(jià)值的東西或事情．
*valuable--very useful and helpful； be worth a lot of money
內(nèi)容包括：
1．兩件你認(rèn)為最有價(jià)值的東西或事情；
2．你這樣認(rèn)為的理由是什么？
3．在今后的生活中，你會(huì)如何對(duì)待這兩件東西或事情？
要求：
1．內(nèi)容包含上述幾個(gè)方面；
2．詞數(shù)：80-100（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
The Two Most Valuable ThingsWe all know that there are many valuable things in the world．For me，the two most valuable things in my life are                                    ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
The old saying"To open a book is always helpful"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．有句諺語(yǔ)"開(kāi)卷有益"清楚的告訴了我們讀書(shū)的好處．
"To open a book is always helpful開(kāi)卷有益"諺語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用
【高分句型二】
It is important for everyone to have a healthy body．對(duì)每一個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)擁有健康的身體都是很重要的．
It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是…

解答 The Two Most Valuable Things        We all know that there are many valuable things in the world．For me，the two most valuable things in my life are books and health．（引出話題）
The old saying"To open a book is always helpful"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．【高分句型一】Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．（書(shū)是我們的朋友）Books are our teachers．They teach us truth，science，literature，and how to live．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our characters and do many other things which we can not do without them．（書(shū)是我們的老師）
          Health is another most valuable  thing a person should have． It is important for everyone to have a healthy body．【高分句型二】Without health，we can't study or work well，even can't eat or sleep well．（失去健康的狀況） So health is the foundation of all，while an unhealthy condition could be the worst burden and barrier you could possibly have．（健康是一切的本錢(qián)）
Therefore I will read more books and try my best to have a healthy body．（今后的打算）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書(shū)面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)．