Question

1．為了保護(hù)環(huán)境，節(jié)約能源，許多國家都出臺(tái)了一系列措施和法律，限制人們破壞環(huán)境的行為．那么，作為一名中學(xué)生，你認(rèn)為可以為保護(hù)環(huán)境，節(jié)約能源做些什么？
提示：1．上學(xué)時(shí)，盡量乘坐公共汽車或騎自行車；   
2．收集廢塑料瓶；
3．節(jié)約用水用電；            
4．不花錢買很貴的進(jìn)口物品；
5…
要求：
①不要逐字翻譯；②語句通順，意思連貫，條理清晰，同時(shí)發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)；
③詞數(shù)：80一100個(gè)，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
To save energy，I will start from the following points．First，it's best to catch a bus or ride a bike to school．Second，if I am free，I will collect the empty plastic bottles and waste paper for recycling．Next，I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom，After using the water，I should never keep the water taprunning all the time．Besides，I won't spend too much money on expensive things．In a word，I'll try my best to save energy．I hope I can do something for our society．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一   
I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom．當(dāng)我離開教室時(shí)，我會(huì)記住關(guān)燈．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
高分句型二
I hope I can do something for our society．我希望我能為我們的社會(huì)做點(diǎn)什么．這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I hope是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 To save energy，I will start from the following points．
First，it's best to catch a bus or ride a bike to school【要點(diǎn)一，上學(xué)時(shí)，盡量乘坐公共汽車或騎自行車】．Second，if I am free，I will collect the empty plastic bottles and waste paper for recyclin【要點(diǎn)二，收集廢塑料瓶】．  Next，I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語從句的使用】． After using the water，I should never keep the water taprunning all the time．【要點(diǎn)三，節(jié)約用水用電】．Besides，I won't spend too much money on expensive things．【要點(diǎn)四，不花錢買很貴的物品】
In a word，I'll try my best to save energy．I hope I can do something for our society【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯
關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．