Question

16．假設(shè)某中學(xué)生英文報開展關(guān)于School life變化的征文活動，請你根據(jù)下表所提示的要點，以Changes in our school life為題，用英語為該報寫一篇稿件，簡述學(xué)校、課堂及課外生活中的若干變化，展望未來生活及如何為此努力．

變化		過去	現(xiàn)在
	學(xué)校環(huán)境	低矮的教學(xué)樓	高高的教學(xué)樓	…（自擬一點）
	課堂學(xué)習(xí)	只是聽老師講	師生可以交流	…（自擬一點）
	課外活動	在教室里讀書	在校園里看書	…（自擬一點）
感想	…（自擬一點自己的感想及學(xué)習(xí)理想）

注意：
1．表達中必須包含所給要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)：90字左右．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．表達中請勿提及本人姓名和學(xué)校．
Changes in our school life
With the development of teaching reform（改革），great changes have taken place in our school in the past few years．Our school life has changed a lot．In the past，our school was small．There used to be low teaching buildings．We just listened to the teachers in class．After class，we only did some reading in the classroom．
However，things have changed a lot．We can see tall classroom buildings in our school．And there's a big garden in front of the school library．In class，we can discuss any question with our teachers．We're not afraid of expressing our ideas before the whole class．We can do some reading in the school yard if we like．Moreover，we have colourful after-school activities now．
I think our school life is becoming more and more colorful．I hope I can make great progress with the help of our teachers．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以Changes in our school life為題簡述學(xué)校、課堂及課外生活中的若干變化，展望未來生活及如何為此努力．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．過去；低矮的教學(xué)樓，只是聽老師講，在教室里讀書
2．現(xiàn)在；高高的教學(xué)樓，師生可以交流，在校園里看書
3．感想．
常用到的重點短語：
used to do sth 過去常常
be afraid of  害怕…
比較級+比較級 越來越…
make progress 取得進步
【高分句型】
1．We can do some reading in the school yard if we like．
if所引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動詞can，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．
2．I think ①our school life is becoming ②more and more colorful．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②比較級+比較級 越來越…
3．I hop①e I can②make great progress③with the help of our teachers．
①省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句，作為hope的賓語．
②make progress 取得進步
③with the help of sb 在某人的幫助下

解答 Changes in our school life
With the development of teaching reform，great changes have taken place in our school in the past few years．Our school life has changed a lot．
In the past，our school was small．There used to be low teaching buildings．（低矮的教學(xué)樓）We just listened to the teachers in class．（只是聽老師講）After class，we only did some reading in the classroom．（在教室里讀書）
However，things have changed a lot．We can see tall classroom buildings in our school．And there's a big garden in front of the school library．（高高的教學(xué)樓和大花園）In class，we can discuss any question with our teachers．We're not afraid of expressing our ideas before the whole class．（師生可以交流）We can do some reading in the school yard if we like．【高分句型】（在校園里看書）Moreover，we have colourful after-school activities now．（精彩的課外活動）
I think our school life is becoming more and more colorful．【高分句型】I hope I can make great progress with the help of our teachers【高分句型】．（我的感想）

點評 試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文．要求介紹學(xué)校生活的該變．本文要寫的材料比較具體，我們要做的就是運用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來．該話題是中考常見 話題之一，該話題貼近學(xué)生生活，更容易引起學(xué)生的共鳴．這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，能熟練的應(yīng)用used to do 句式，注意到了不同時態(tài)的應(yīng)用變化，一開始的現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，之后的一般過去時及一般現(xiàn)在時運用的都十分的恰當(dāng)．