Question

最近，你們學(xué)校開展了以“中國夢，我的夢”為主題的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生應(yīng)該有自己的夢想，你的夢想是什么呢？請你以“My Dream”為題寫一篇英語短文。
要求：
1.描述自己的夢想。
2.如何實現(xiàn)這個夢想。
3. 80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、地名和校名等相關(guān)信息。
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream  is

Answer 1

My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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