Question

提示：我們生活在一個安寧的社會，父母每天為我們準備好吃的和穿的，老師每天為我們傳授知識，朋友一直在給予我們支持與鼓勵。這一切，我們看在眼里，也記在心里。在畢業之際，請以“Thanks”為題，用英語寫一篇文章,表達你的感恩之情。

要求：1．根據所給題目，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于60個；

2．語言流暢，書寫規范，卷面整潔;

3．文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；

4．書面表達必須寫在答題卷上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Mom, thank you for so many years of my education and training, ignorance of the past, I always make you angry, but now I grow up, self-reliance, and I feel that I should not be so naive。I will work hard at all the subjects.I will not live up to your expectations! I'm really grateful to my mother to take care of me. When I was sick, my mother is always did her best to take care of me. When I failed the examination, my mother also encouraged me to refresh, not to become disheartened. Really grateful to what my mother has done.I know it was my mother's help that made me learned how to perform well in my life. I really would like to thank my mother. I think in this world, I love you more than anyone.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，以“Thanks”為題，用英語寫一篇文章,表達你的感恩之情。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態主要詞匯等問題，根據要求可知本句主要是過去時態，人稱是第一人稱。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內容發揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: thank you for so many years of my education and training謝謝你這么多年對我的教育和培養；I will work hard at all the subjects. 我會努力學習所有的科目；When I failed the examination, my mother also encouraged me to refresh, not to become disheartened. 當我考試不及格，媽媽也鼓勵我振作，不要灰心等等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：提示性作文。